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Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: All university students should take basic science courses regardless of their fields of study.

Universities have always been in a struggle between providing their students with basic science courses as well as major courses and just educating their field's lessons since the dawn of education systems. Different courses, ranging from basic math to technical ones, have been provided in order to respond to this issue. With this in mind, presently, a controversy exists as to whether students should take basic science courses as well, or courses which are related to their field is enough for their graduation. While some argue that taking basic science courses is a kind of wasting the time, others believe otherwise. I, for one, subscribe to the latter group. The reasons for this claim are as follows.
The first reason which should be taken into consideration is that human beings are multi-dimensional creatures and it is necessary for them to be educated in various fields rather than having capability merely in a single field. Despite the fact that taking various science courses may lead to students’ more occupation, it will help them to broaden their horizons and think about their problems in open-minded methods. To shed more light on this issue, take a person who has competency in just one field. This type of person, indeed will face problems which are not consistent with his major, consequently, he will not able to overcome the problem and need to assign the problem to others which may be money consuming for him.


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